Mayfly script

MAYFLY(Script)

Day1

Opening Scene

Robin (main character)

Eyes open (some sounds coming from the background increasing)

He wake up on the strange place (railway station)*

He don't know who is he and he wearing old dirty Kurta and sniker...he shocked where and who get him there.

He is looking to the others and others are looking him

they are beggars and he looks too...(some throw a coin over him.)

he trying to stress his mind and he touches his head there is some bleeding (got injury on his head)..he don’t know about that

he go to pee nearby...and he notice that he got branded underpants with new snicker(shoes)

he walk away from there...and he looking his hands  and touch his face(got body pain )

he ask someone-"bhai yeh kon se jagha h"

man replied during walking- Allahabad (with strange face)

he(strangely said)-Allahabad ..!yeh kahan aata/pardta hai..(all are in single shot)

he see/stare  2 men(gangster guys)  hitting someone who lay on the ground (shutting with bad words)

there is a white* classic car standing behind them...

(camera shoot from far distance with slowmotion)

1 of the guy see him with evil expression

and he(boy/robin) turn his face down left n right(like scaring) and turn back..

Scene 1.1

after sometime is he sitting on the near one local hotel/tea stole and watching a kid who's eating ice cream*

[may be add this-kid ice cream's big part falls down]{his(boy) experation like hungry[muh khula rehna,thuk gutakna,jibh se onth(mouth)chatna like that]}

Day 2

so he get hungry too so he ask for food on local hotel near station...

so he get hit from that shop after 4-5 hotel.

boy with pity/hungery face- kahana (with experation of taking food)

Robin

“Bhai kuch khane ko koga kya”

All Hotals replies

hotel 1- chal bhag yahan se...

hotel 2- "haat mad****d"

hotel 3- "chiler nahi hai"

hotel 4- "bhag bhs***"

hotel 5- "kam kare ga..

{he got the food until he work there n finally he take snacks}

boy(robin)-expiration of haan(yes)...he eat so fast samosa, chatni etc.

Hotel owner-"kahan se aaya hai"

boy- "pata nahi"/malum nahi (during eating)

owner- naam kya hai tera

boy- pata nahi (during eating)

owner- "kuch to pata hoga …kon hai, kahan se aaya , chal ab jo bhi aaye uske liye plate lagana or uske jane ke baad table saaf karna...samajh gaya na"

boy(robin)-haan (little smily face)

{A small boy(Chotu)also work there, he get angey/ from him bcoz he got his job.}

OWNER-yeh chotu isko koi kapara de de..

(with angey face) Chotu-yeh le...isko pahan le or yeh saaf karne ke liye.. ( going in with murmuring)

boy get change his cloth with tshirt/vest n half pant and fold that kurta and give to a begger(old O ) who is passing from there

Day3

Scene 3

[single shot scene-man1(don)come from his home and going to the driving seat from rear side of the car(camera focus to the don and then car and then his daughter)

D-Man 1\Getting car key to the 1 of the G guys and said

Chabi lao…petrol vetrol hai ki nahi…saale din bhar ghumte rahete ho

Vinod- haan bhai yeh lo…or woh wakil sala paiseva nahi diya

(On the window) D man-  Achcha me usse sham ko baat karta hun…

who is come n open door of car and sit on front seat n she got a locket(focus to the locket)

and she get it in to the hand and Car goes away straight]{MA1}(focus to the hotel/tea*)

Day4

Scene 4

they are washing dishes together...

owner call to chotu -chotu.... choootuuu... (singing like)

boy(robin)

-hahahaha.....chotu ..chal ja chootuu...(with smily face)

Chotu

" chotu hoga tera l**d"(with anger straight forward)

robin(boy) hit him on his head and chotu also hit him (pat pat chat pat) n

Chotu

Teri ma ka saale wese bhi tera koi nam h?..paata nahi kahan se aaya h..saala

Owner(come to there)

Bosar***an(gaali) ke kam karo chu chap.yeh le robin..is se doh de.tera nam aaj se yahi h...(owner drop it on the tub)going away(music like intro)

then Robin clean the table and 3 plate serve samosa chatni to customers(single shot)

Day5

Scene 5

Chotu seeing them when Owner gives money to boy Robin for buying something

and chutu get angry with that and steal that money from him which it paid by hotel owner

Chotu snatch that money from the Robin’s hand and running out from the hotel

Running straight

Robin is running behind him too

Meanwhile, Gangsters guys on the car driving fast with having fun with drinking beer on the narrow street

And street Stuffs are falling over the car like bra, box of something, etc

Guy1 said

Ohoooooooo…..!

(Guy2 is driving with drinking beer)

And suddenly  car comes to the main road with little jump

And hit the Chotu

Local people are there comes close to see what happen

people talking about how he was dead. Crowd

Robin suddenly stopped and aback

and hotel owner  grab him by his arm to not involve in this accident

Hotel Owner said

“Sale k mana kiya tha na …ab sidhi tara se kaam pe lag …

(backgound people voice-arey kya bataye saale yeh kute ke mafik to road me bhatakte rahate hai)

{focus on robin n owner they are away from accident}

They are in the hotel

They are talking about chutu

Owner: tere ko mana kiya ki

Robin: (while during work)

are main kya karta ….woh hi  paise le k bhaga tha Ab me kya karta

Then some one comes in the hotel

Owner: chal achcha kaam kar

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Scene 6

After done some work

A girl (payal) comes there in hotel to take some snakes (samosa)...she put her book on the hotel counter container bottle

Girl:

Uncle 8 samosa pack kar dena

Hotel Owner:

Achcha beta, or kuch

Girl:

Nahi bas chatani daldijiye ga

H.Owner (loudly)

Robin 8 samosa pack kar phatak se…

he staring her and she one look him too with small smile{slowmotion}(music-romatic)then owner hit him on the head(music stop)

H.Owner:

(hit him on his head and said)

Sale  samosa pack kar ghur ka raha h

She little laughs over that reaction

Robin watching her with smiley face and his hand on his head where owner beaten him

She is smile look and going from there

DAY7

SCENE 7

she miss her books on the counter of the hotel.

H.Owner-   oye ja woh payal bitiya book bhul gai..ja de aa

Robin- Payal (smile face)

he get jump n run after her n reach to her

On the middle of road robin stopped her

Robin said-aapki book  (smile face with panting)

girl-oh..thank u..(smile face)

after few seconds later

they are watching

Robin- kya … kya  aap free ho sakti ho..(with hesitated face) “kya hum kahin mil sakte hain”

girl(little surprise+smile)-abhi to main ghar ja rahi hun...

girl- 8:00 baje coaching se chutti hogi..to woh chorahe se me ghar aati hun...par kyun?

Robin(walk slowy back)-nahi kuch nahi..8:00 baje...thik hai chorahe par....main intajar karun ga

she get smile with questionable face ...getting off from there…

he is watching her while she leaving with bye gesture

(she impress by him, she signal him to meet her on choraha(crossroad) after coaching at 9)

Second Half  Day8

Scene8

(fastforword time laps) he is working and clock is running

At night (MA!#storyboard)

Before entering G-guys abuse local girls and comment with laugh over them(or maybe she slapped one of them )

That G gangster guys , seth(Don) enter to the hotel and going backside

Behind hotel the place of poor club card games /alcohols/cigarettes {music-sly and family stone (on ur music folder)}

Day9

Scene9

Starting something*(pending) red light card table

On the 3 patti  card game table

Dman1-  kelo yar

owner- bhai abhi hotal dekhna h

Dman1- abbey behto yar...hotal kahan bhaga ja raha h...counter me lounda hai na bus fir ka !

yar hamaun ka time dediya karo yar

owner- Robin 1 soda or le aana

Dman2- yeh londa naya hai kya…

Owner – haan aaj hi aaya hai …pata nahi kahan ka hai , na naam ka pata na maa baap ka …

or kismet to dekho aaj aaya yeh …or yeh logo ne chotu ko chutti me bhej diya …

D man2 – kab kahan …woh apna chotu ,piddi… kya hua ?

Owner-ab inahin se puncho....yeh dono hotal ke bahar chilm chile kar rahe the ..

yeh bhai saab (man1) ne car se pel deya... sukar mano bach ga.

Don(seth):yeh sale hai hi bosari k chutiya…..or gaadri ki bhi maa bhen kar k rakhi h (with hit head of  G Guy)

G GUY1-  arey bhaiya yeh saale bhi road mai hi nachte rahe hai…(to finger on robin side)

D man2- (to Robin) idhar aa kuch nahi hota ….yeh  life me hota rehta h…

music starts people playing cards

so Robin did that as owner said . still watching on the wall clock time around 8:10night

camera rotates around them

they are playing ,drink beer, shouting, laughing and cheering up (slow motion with f forward)muted

Robin server as they said and he is working fast forward

Clock are running as that music sounds

robin standing there to watching them and looking clock too

Dman -kam ho Gaya(during playing n drinking)

robin- haan

Dman –patte khela h kabhi

Robin- shake his head to saying no…

Dman2-aaja...yar bache ko bhi patte banto..

owner-nahi yar ...kya kar raho hai...

gguy- are khelne do yar

{robin won the hand]

Robin playing now

 Hand 1 

 D man have 3 card of king ,queen and jack in same color

and robin have 3 card  too ace,king and queen with same color

and third man got nothing

And they are playing and betting very long

And finaly robin won the match

Hand 2

This time robin have ace, king and queen with different color

And D man- got nothing but is betting for bluff and this time big round so much

Other G men got small hands

GGuy2- hahaha lo or bheta lo lardke ko..(to man2)

gGuy 1- yar tu to khiladi...

[robin won again]

man2 act like down off the hang/alcohal(hooo...budoodubdbuod)ahhaa...ab banto..yar bahut jit liya yar...nasa utar diya

robin playing with eye on the clock (time 8:13)

owner don’t have money ,

Owner said - paise nahi h...kya karun (GETTING UP)

man 1- kehelo kya...badhaoo...hotal dao lagade..

owner-chutiyapa hai ka....bey

man1- hahaa..ALL ARE LOUGHING...londa woh bhi le jayega

Dman- le pakard…(bundle of money)

Robin-bhaiya kuch mat do aap .."mujhe bus 1 ghante ki chutti dila do"(watching clock time 8:13)

owner-tereko kaye ki chuti be...tera kon hai bey "(instally)

man1- abey dedo na bey kon sa tumse pese mang raha h..ek to har rahe upper se..

owner- nai yar fir daily ka lafrad

D-man2 - par kuch bhi kaho..ladke ka luck achcha h …

kabhi bardi dao mai bethe ga

man1- pate(cards) to deko......kya kismat hai yar...

 Robin- kismat achchi hoti to yahan thodri na hota...(watching clock time 8:30)

man2- bhai jaan aaj tum gaye...(to owner)

(on nai chal)man2-aaja beta aab dekhta hun...he bet all of it and car too

D man – yeh lo fir …jo hoga dekha jayega

hooo......waoh... arey bhai kya kar rahe ho (G guy said)

man1/2- le gaya sari baazi londa

robin- ab main jaun...

man2- yar jane do

dman (HANGING)-

they stand up

day10

scene10

(MA!#11storyboard)

D-man2 seth stand up and walk with robin (hand on his shoulder)

Dman2- main bhi tere hi tarah tha....bindas , jo marzi hoti thi woh karta tha

wese koi ladki hai kya....hann(with noughty face) han

robin-hmmm(sign of yes with smile n shy)

D-man2(with excited)oh teri plne jar raha h kya

Robin(shy )arey nahi

D-man- are ja enjoy kar ...or haan yeh…ek second…kahan gaya (finding packet in his own pocket)

Haan …yeh le(put condom packet on his front pocket)

“ja yar ash kar”

robin wallk fast and get on the car driving seat …

(Music play “fly robin fly ”)

man2 give signal to his gangster guys to follow him(robin)during  outside of the hotel and smoking cigarette

gangster guys standing on the other side of the hotel  front of small pan shop (cigarette shop )

receive signal n drop the cigarettes, ready to move on bike to follow him

day11

Scene 11

when he reach crossroad (choraha)

(LC#4storyboard)

Girl is standing on the choraha (cross road)waiting for him and she seeing that car which is driving by Robin so she scared and try to getting off

Then suddenly boy Robin stop the car and said- (blushing)...Hi

girl-(smile+ surprise) tum.....or yeh car tumahe pass kese aai...

boy-woh sab chordo...chalo...ander to beto, sab batata hun...

girl(thinking) looking on the road

boy- plz

girl getting in car…

boy- cycle lock hai na…

girl-hmmmm...

girl- wese yeh car kisi hai (with sliming face)

boy- meri hai...kyun..?achi nahi h kya

girl- nahi...yeh to meri favroit h..par tumhari...chori ki kya

boy- kya bakwas kar rahi ho...tumhe me chor lagta nun kya

girl-to fir?

boy-yehh (with pouse)...mujhe kisi ne gift diya h...hmmm....okey main ek admi se shart(bet) jit gaya tha..

girl-or unho ne yeh car tumko de di..hamesha ke liye

boy-hahahha...wohi to...socho...kitna chutiya hoga woh admi...hahaha

boy-gaana suno gi (some touching n switching stereo)

girl is silent and see him and smiling

he is finding something to play...

girl- yahan se on hota hai (Smile)...press the button to play song

boy- woh me jara kam chalata hun isliye

 girl: ohhhh(smiling)

so he play the song

cds radio songs play-  (joke happen about old songs)

and girl smile over it

music -1a-(continus)they are talking and smiling

girl(ruthe hui)-hehehe(nakal utari)..woh chutiya mera baap hai...or unhe agar pata chalgaya ki tu mere saath hai...

boy-(aback)kya....?(carstop)he touch his pocket(condom in there)

girl- kya hua...

boy- kuch nahi..mera dil

girl-slightly smile 

Day12

Scene 12

 (music-1a continus)

And they reached the shopping mall...

he purchase new full shirt (slews folding)+ pant and show her to get try something..

and  he force her to take try something ...she coming out from the trail room...with shoulder up and shy emotion and blushing

and she try many dress (1 by 1 continue shot)

That 2 gangsters riding on the bike to find robin (with same music)

he stare n got open his mouth...

her smile experation like(u say something)or shoulder getting down and eyes goes up(relax) and smile

they are coming carry shopping bags and she is laughing (slow motion) walk roundly

they are coming out from the mall with different  dress (look stylish)

DAY13

Scene 13

they are in the car again with new dress and sunglass

he play song- balam mari pich kari…..

girl open her hair and getting her head out of the window of the car and feel the air  (music on main)

and he's watching her while driving...

they reach a restaurant/hotel...

boy- (to waiter)hmm yeh wala... or tum kya logi

girl- kuch bhi

(he order 2 burger and 1 french fries + 2 coke or something)

boy- woh book kon si thi jo main tumhe subha di thi...

girl (taking book out)- woh hmmm...reh rahi...MAYFLY yeh hamari school ki liberry se mily hai...tumhe mayfly pata hai…

boy  pause  n shack head like sounds naha (ummhmm)while eating

girl-mayfly ek esa kirda(bug) hai ko sab se kam life jita hai...usi ki bari main hai...(she is continous speak about it n voice goes dim)

boy- stare her...imagin about to getting her lips... focas on the girl face closeup on her face n lips, eyes…slowmotion with romantic bg music (then suddenly voice come to his ear of her(she)-hello hello(voice incressing)

girl- kya hua

boy- nahi kuch  nahi..(like waking up expiration)

Romantic music continuous

That 2 gangsters riding on the bike with one of them pointing finger on the restaurant (where boy/girl  are sitting)

and they stop and calling  to ....

D-man1(face close up)taking phone on the ear with smoking and stands outside of the hotel and then aback expiration and throw his cigarette

(everything is in mute with romantic music)

Scene in the restaurant they are eating like burger (he) and French fries(she)...

boy (during eating burger)watching her

-she looks upset and playing with French and sauce

(camera focus on the playing souces+fries and then goes up to girl upset expertion) like boy is watching her

boy(expertion like yak/gros/disgusting when she is playing with souces+fries) and he said

-kya hua ! tum kaha nahi rahi..(while taking other bit of burger)

girl-main aaj tak kabhi kisi ke saath bahar nahi aai or school me bhi koi mera friend nahi h...(instently)

boy-haan maine tumari ungli dekhi(eye goes to her hand for seconds while talking)

girl-kya?(simple)

boy- (shaking his head) nahi kuch nahi pir

girl-or aaj main tumhare saath yahan hun ...ki kon ho tum..tumara naam kya hai... Kahan se aaye ho...

boy- main bhi nahi janta hun

girl-haan tumhe kya farak pardta hai ki mera naam se...(in dime voice, sad + taunt)

boy-nahi nahi...mara naam kya hai...or main kon hun…mujhe sach me nahi malum

Girl- kya..(Surprise)

boy- haan ..aaj subhe se main yeh paata lagana chahta hun ..

ki main aab tak kahan tha...mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi...

ki main kon hun, kahan se aaya hun,or mera naam kya h

par yeh aacha h..kyun ki main aab chahata hi nahi hun ki main kon tha...or kahan tha..(staring her eyes)

bas itna janta hun ki yeh jo samaye(time) hai...mujhe sabse aacha lag raha hai...

or mujhe lagta hai ki tumye bhi achcha lag raha hoga ...

and they stare each other's eyes (meanwhile they try to touch each other's hand n come slowly closer)

they stare continuously each other...sudenly behind the scene/table 1 gangster guy comes n scare them (like haaaaaaa.....evil roar sound)

so they r screeming too haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....{Am2} they holds each others hand tightly

and other gangster guy drag him(boy)out...of the restaurant

she (aback)(shouting)screeming and G guy--aahahahaha...hahahahaa..(evil like usse chirad raha h with holding her)

DAY14

Scene14

D-man1(her dad) hit him (G guy) on head- use ja ke pakard...

Outside of the restaurant they gangster guy through him on the ground

she is crying and say -plz papa chord do...

D-man1(her father) drag her out of the restaurant by her arm and said tune sari ijjat mitti me mila di

she said- kya kiya hai mai/esa kya gunha kar diya maine

kyun kar rahe app ho mere saath yesa

or aap kya kar rahe ho …kis ijjat ki baat kar rahe ho..

logo ko marna , dhamkana …aurte to aap ke liye khelona h

mujhe to aap ko papa bolne me bhi sharam aati h.

(the other gangser guys hitting  him by legs and drag him in to the car)it happen behind man1 when he talking to his daughter

she-app ki society kisi ko marne ka hak deti hai or agar main kisi ke saath jaun to yeh hak mujhe nahi deti..bhard me gai aap ki yeh sociaty or aap(optional)

man1 angry breathing n slap her (her hairs r open n she's crying)

and he turn and said (fingering on her face for sec)n said "ghar pahuncho...sidhe ghar.."

1GGuy stand on the door of car with evil smile (ungli se isara kiya jane ko)expesion like siti bajate huye.

and man1 get in the car and he drive off there so fast.

car is going away from the girl

{focus on the crying girl and dollying back (going far from her)}

Day15

Scene 15

(Action music)

In the car he getting struggle to escape (dhakka mukka)"main kya kiya hai,saale chor mujhe"

they hit him (smack/punch)and he lose that locket there on front seat(/footrest)

seth man1- meri hi car me meri hi bethi ko..saale bata hun tujhe ki kiya kya h.....(while driving)

and he open the car's door open door slightly and car drifty stop and he getting out of the car during this one guy pull his shirt and shirt is tear(fat gai)so he shirts off n leave there

he is running (escape) from there one guy follow him and one is from in car to turn back in the car

Scene from far with empty road and some smoke and yellow lights

D-man1 –aggressively (with anger face) gandu ek londa nahi pakard sakta tu (to the back seat G guy)

G guy getting off the car and back to him (Robin) and during this he said - teri to/ sala bhag k gaye ga kahan (short any word)

he(robin) getting off the road n go to small house street and the guy who follow him is following and they running n the front of chasing him ...

During running his pant got tear(fat gai)  by iron wires which ties on the reeling of the garden and he fall by that tear cloth of pant. so he get off his pant during running. (all night timing)

He comes on the main road

{and take cloth from the one beggar (try to sleep) who clean(jhard raha tha) his kurta.

so he grab it and wear it...continues running

on one point on the road car suddenly come(stop) to front of him. (all are in one shot/one scene  from far distance with empty main road with smoke)

D-man- get baseball bat from the trunk of the car and hit him

they got him n hit on his head so hard and getting in the car

Day 16

Down morning time around 4-5 am

and drop on the near station/throw him out from the car.....

time laps and morning and he is lay on the ground

(same place where he was waked up yesterday)

Music continues

(Ending)

(c) 2016 AKHILESH TRIPATHI